How To Fix the Harry Potter BOOKS

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Use the code TREE for 51% off World Anvil with the link https://worldanvil.com/?c=mltt • Or else try it out for free!! • Harry Potter is a hugely successful set of books but also very flawed ones. JK Rowling is both great at ideas but also a bad writer. It's easy to criticise but harder to make that constructive criticism so this analysis videoessay breaks down exactly what needs changing or fixing with Harry Potter writing and the Philosopher's Stone and why even doing this is an important writing exercise. • This video is sponsored by World Anvil • TIMESTAMPS • 00:00:00 Intro • 00:05:22 1: CRAFT • 00:09:37 Description • 00:14:12 2: CHARACTERISATION • 00:16:52 my editing skills leave much to be desired • 00:19:05 Dudley • 00:23:05 Vernon Petunia • 00:31:04 Hagrid • 00:36:23 Dumbledore • 00:38:47 Draco • 00:50:56 Harry • 00:57:17 Ron Hermione • 01:07:25 Conclusion • 01:10:16 3: THEME • 01:13:54 Cruelty • 01:24:35 Teaching • 01:26:35 (i) Filch • 01:28:56 (ii) Hagrid • 01:40:17 (iii) Quirrell • 01:43:14 (iv) Snape • 01:45:40 (v) Dumbledore • 01:48:49 Vulnerability • 01:53:10 Conclusion • 01:55:48 4: WORLDBUILDING • 01:59:54 Governors • 02:10:44 Other Schools • 02:25:24 Squibs • 02:29:36 Genetics • 02:34:05 Secrecy • 02:36:13 Quidditch • 02:42:37 Locked Wands • 02:48:50 Wild Magic • 02:54:42 5: DIVERSITY • 02:59:45 Culture • 03:04:00 Friends • 03:06:20 Gender • 03:09:14 6: CONCLUSION • MUSIC • All lofi beats by Chill Astronaut • Jonny Easton - Aurora • Nature Healing Society - 432Hz Meditation Relaxing • Alan Ellis - Sea Terms • Patreon link: / mylittlethoughttree • Buymeacoffee link: https://www.buymeacoffee.com/mltt • Second channel: / @thoughtlesstree • Dave's Walks video: • Walking the Entire Cotswold Way - Chi... • Thankyou to my small thought tree patrons: Alexa Rives, Apple Chip, Ava Erickson, CapoXproductions, Cormac Walsh, Daniel Zafer-Joyce, Eugene, Hailey Hantzen Stapert, Maria Verghelet, Matt Carlson, Paul Wilson, Sam Moore, A Baby Loaf of Tillamook Smoked Medium Cheddar, anonymous_patron, Blackbeard_TX, Britt Caldwell, Darragh, Jeremy Coyle, John McKean, Kevin Alphenaar, Meredith, Stevie G, tim timmy, Ugne Tartilaite, voo csgo, Kevin Alphenaar, A Baby Loaf of Tillamook Smoked Medium Cheddar, tim timmy, Emily Hanser, Jenni, fearz._., valerie blassey, Katina, dev67, Daniel J Coetzer, Darinka Zobenica, Artyskepty, and Antifa Count Duckula • #harrypotter #writing #editing

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